Rewrite the essay with the better improvmemt

I’m working on a English exercise and need support.

Choose one of the two previous essays submitted. Revise and improve the essay by:

1. Correcting all grammar errors and other items noted in the previous grading process
2. Add information to the essay to increase the length to a minimum of four pages
3. Include the Works Cited page, with a minimum of three sources.

Summary: The essay must be a minimum of four pages long, have three sources on the Works Cited page, in-text citations correctly used, in third person and in MLA format.

This assignment is worth 300 points – Make it good!!