Revise My Essay based on my teachers feedback

I’m studying for my Psychology class and need an explanation.

Please use my exact essay attached below, and revise it based on this feedback left by my teacher:

Please make the following changes for the final draft:

1. Add more headings to help organize your paper

2. Instead of arguing both side separately, consider a thesis statement of “addiction has both a biologival and social component” then your headings can be “biologial factors” and “social factors” adn then you can organize them by heading within those sections further. 

failure to make the aforementioned revisions will result in point deductions for my final paper.

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