please help me polish my cover letter

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I hope you can help me revise my cover letter and make my cover letter more formal. You may use some positive adjectives about personality. I am applying a sales position in a dealership, so it will be more about customer service. In addition, I will provide some more personal information for reference. My major is automotive business, so I think I have a certain understanding of the daily work of a dealership, but I have no previous dealership working experience. I wrote a part-time job in my cover letter and I also worked as a restaurant server. Could you give me a note if there is something you think I should write in the cover letter but I didn’t provide any information about it? Thank you

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