please review the feedback i will provide you about my last rough draft carefully on the grading rubric and/or submission comments. Make a checklist, in your own words, of 3-5 things you can work on and why when preparing Sunday’s final draft of the Response Essay. Your reflection should be 100-200 words. Please simply type directly into the text box for this assignment rather than uploading a Word document. Be sure to use 14pt font since it is way easier to read, and use complete sentences. Bullet points are OK.
instructor feed back on my outline:
Use full date and include a header. Also, avoid extra line spacing. I can help you with this part. Just let me know whether you use Google Docs, Microsoft Word, or some other program. Finally, do not bold your title. Consider developing your introduction a bit more and beginning with a hook. Perhaps you could include an engaging statistic from a credible source.Your title Could be a bit more catchy.. Consider developing your introduction a bit more and beginning with a hook. Perhaps you could include an engaging statistic from a credible source. For the thesis, You need to make your own argument, not cite a source. Also, use bold-face. Your last body paragraph seems to be covering more than one topic. Also, work on topic sentences that transition from the previous body paragraph. That way, all of your body paragraphs build upon one another more effectively.