Help me to revise the introduction part of my dissertation

I’m studying for my Management class and don’t understand how to answer this. Can you help me study?

Help me to revise the introduction part of my dissertation

The places need to be modified or replaced are as following:

1. Professor said my current topic will be so broad. It needs to be specific

2. The topic needs to be specific like the area of museum or the area of music

3. The dissertation needs to be taking about how its been innovated.

I have attached my proposal for the dissertation and the current Introduction part. Please revised it as soon as possible.

Please make sure you change the topic to the specific one

All the work must be original

Turnitin report is required

Thank you very much!

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