formal email to employer after passing interview

I’m trying to learn for my Internship class and I’m stuck. Can you help?

I want to write a formal email expressing my gratitude for getting this job. With good writing, around 50 words. The following is my classmate’s email who has a same employer with me and reply same email, it can be used as a reference. Thank you

I hope you are well. Thank you again for offering me this opportunity, I am excited beyond words to begin my responsibilities as a (position). I have completed and attached all the documents you requested. I hope that everything is in order, otherwise, I trust that you will inform me so I can make the necessary corrections.

Best Regards,

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