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Part A: For this assignment, you’ll need to post your 3 body paragraphs for your research paper.

Make sure to view the lecture 17 on adding in a 4th quote as it will be very helpful to you 🙂

1] Body 1 is about improving romantic relationships, body 2 about improving family relationships, and body 3 about improving friendships

2] Remember, the first time you are quoting from your researched articles, you need to use a signal phrase in the context. The second time you quote from the same source, you can use a shorter context.

3] If you are quoting from Gottman or your primary library articles, you can use regular context as these will be introduced in the introduction.

4] In 2 of your 3 body paragraphs, you must add a 4th quote sandwich adding in Gottman’s ideas.

Follow the outline below. Remember, the closer you follow the outline, the more points you will receive.

Part B: Once you have posted your 3 body paragraphs, comment on someone in your group’s work with a minimum of 5 sentences. Focus on transitions, topic sentences, main point sentences, quotes with context, did they use 2 outside sources in addition to Dweck and the primary library source, did they add in a 4th Gottman quotation sandwich in 2 of the body paragraphs?

Outline:

Body Paragraph #1 – Improving romantic relationships

Transition + topic sentence that we can improve our romantic relationships in 3 ways 1,2,3.
Transition + main idea sentence about way 1.
Context [include signal phrase if first time source is used] + quote from article illustrating idea.
Explanation of how quote support main idea sentence.
Transition + main idea sentence about way 2.
Context [include signal phrase if first time source is used]+ quote from article illustrating idea.
Explanation of how quote support main idea sentence.
Transition + main idea sentence about way 3.
Context [include signal phrase if first time source is used]+ quote from article illustrating idea.
Explanation of how quote support main idea sentence.

**Note: you can add in a Gottman quote sandwich directly after topic sentence if the leadership matches mindset OR after a main idea or at the end of the paragraph
Transition + main idea sentence that the idea matches Gottman because …
Context+quote illustrating idea
Explanation of how quote and idea match leader’s leadership quality

Body Paragraph #2 – Improving family relationships

Transition + topic sentence that we can improve our family relationships in 3 ways 1,2,3.
Transition + main idea sentence about way 1.
Context [include signal phrase if first time source is used] + quote from article illustrating idea.
Explanation of how quote support main idea sentence.
Transition + main idea sentence about way 2.
Context [include signal phrase if first time source is used]+ quote from article illustrating idea.
Explanation of how quote support main idea sentence.
Transition + main idea sentence about way 3.
Context [include signal phrase if first time source is used]+ quote from article illustrating idea.
Explanation of how quote support main idea sentence.

**Note: you can add in a Gottman quote sandwich directly after topic sentence if the leadership matches mindset OR after a main idea or at the end of the paragraph
Transition + main idea sentence that the idea matches Gottman because …
Context+quote illustrating idea
Explanation of how quote and idea match leader’s leadership quality

Body Paragraph #1 – Improving friendships

Transition + topic sentence that we can improve our friendships in 3 ways 1,2,3.
Transition + main idea sentence about way 1.
Context [include signal phrase if first time source is used] + quote from article illustrating idea.
Explanation of how quote support main idea sentence.
Transition + main idea sentence about way 2.
Context [include signal phrase if first time source is used]+ quote from article illustrating idea.
Explanation of how quote support main idea sentence.
Transition + main idea sentence about way 3.
Context [include signal phrase if first time source is used]+ quote from article illustrating idea.
Explanation of how quote support main idea sentence.

**Note: you can add in a Gottman quote sandwich directly after topic sentence if the leadership matches mindset OR after a main idea or at the end of the paragraph
Transition + main idea sentence that the idea matches Gottman because …
Context+quote illustrating idea
Explanation of how quote and idea match leader’s leadership quality

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